for what you can do in a week i think finish coloring and MAYBE a background. but thats pretty much it. maybe even tiny little sound effects of chewing or something!
Since this is dated for April 8, I don't know where you are with this animation. The sound is nice, story is simple, and the moving lines remind me of Ed, Edd and Eddy. I would like to see the finished monster scenes since those change the tone of your animation.
Hey Lemon, you're story is fun. As for the animation, it is coming along nicely. I think a few sound effects could help. Gasps when they react to the girl grabbing the last rice ball could benefit from this. Other than that keep going, it's almost done!
Lemon, what is the status of your animatic for today's crit?
ReplyDeletethis has such a unexpected ending I would love to see some backgrounds
ReplyDeletefor what you can do in a week i think finish coloring and MAYBE a background. but thats pretty much it. maybe even tiny little sound effects of chewing or something!
ReplyDeleteGood work. All you really need is to color the last few shots. I look forward to seeing it completed.
ReplyDeleteSince this is dated for April 8, I don't know where you are with this animation. The sound is nice, story is simple, and the moving lines remind me of Ed, Edd and Eddy. I would like to see the finished monster scenes since those change the tone of your animation.
ReplyDeleteI guess the background need work...no blacks though
ReplyDeleteHey Lemon, you're story is fun. As for the animation, it is coming along nicely. I think a few sound effects could help. Gasps when they react to the girl grabbing the last rice ball could benefit from this. Other than that keep going, it's almost done!
ReplyDeletewhen the screaming happens it feels so epic.
ReplyDeleteI've seen your piece many times and it's still fun to watch.
you're all most done so good job!
Good feedback, people.
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